Idea Pitch Feedback

Good detail of idea, need to solidify shot ideas as opposed to having several different ones.
- Story board, Shot list

Need to get permission from R.A.F Upwood to film on training grounds.




A more final idea, that we just thought of:

Scene 1.

SHOT: Morning, mans face asleep, alarm goes off, opens his eyes and wakes up. Non-diagetic soundtrack starts as his eyes open (still)

SHOT: Hand picking out tie (still)

SHOT: Hand holding newspaper at breakfast table. (still)

SHOT: Sip of coffee, close up (still)

SHOT: Coffee mug bang on table, close up (still)

SHOT: Key locking door (still)

SHOT: Inside car, in perspective of passenger seat, mans elbow on window sill, head resting on his hand waiting for traffic lights to change, looks up at traffic light (still)

SHOT: Perspective of just outside car, from drivers window of lights changing to green (still)

SHOT: Inside car, passenger seat, car accelerates away (still)

To Be Continued...